2019年5月18日雅思小作文題目

國內(nèi)（A類）：折線圖

雅思小作文折線圖范文解析

1.答題步驟一

觀察時間軸：從the past到the future，于是特別注意時態(tài)。

2.答題步驟二

確定會用到現(xiàn)在完成時：事件的起點(diǎn)在過去，結(jié)果在現(xiàn)在。

3.答題步驟三：

對四條線做分組（此圖根據(jù)線的位置分組）：組1為the US & South Korea；組2為India & China.

4.答題步驟四：

當(dāng)然首先寫 Introduction.

The lines represent four countries’ proportions of urban populations since 1970 and the projection for the future until 2030.【注意對于時間線的描述，當(dāng)時間軸出現(xiàn)從過往到將來的線圖時，可以套用】

5.答題步驟五：

然后自然是寫B(tài)ody。根據(jù)預(yù)先做好的分組順序展開主體部分的寫作。

First, the dominating majority of Americans have been urban population【用現(xiàn)在完成時的時候，已經(jīng)暗示了結(jié)束的時間點(diǎn)，所以不需要特別指出】【（寫法一）先描述整體特征，不帶數(shù)值】,【再描述值得注意的數(shù)字】and it has slowly grown from 70 percent to 80 percent. With the slow growth projected to continue, the proportion will grow only slightly. Second, in South Korea, there has been a rapid growth to America’s high level, and the time before 2010 witnessed the surge (from 40 percent to 75 percent). According to the projection for the future, the country’s urban population will be almost identical to America’s. 

至此，我們寫完了組1。感覺還不錯，但是，其實(shí)上面的展示，其實(shí)是“規(guī)矩”寫法，也即是說，我們的寫作還是不夠summarize the information。

于是，我們看看“理想”寫法如下：

The US has always had high levels of urbanization in their populations, as the percentage has constantly been high (over 70 percent and gradually reaching 80 percent). South Korea, since at a low level (40 percent), have caught up with the US because of a surge until 2010. It is anticipated that the two countries’ urban populations will both grow only slightly and be almost identical proportionally by 2030.

總結(jié)一下規(guī)矩寫法和理想寫法的主要區(qū)別：規(guī)矩寫法對于線條的描述采用了“總 – 分”的兩步走寫法，并且對于每一個特征的發(fā)生都當(dāng)作了獨(dú)立事件用獨(dú)立的clause來描述，所以篇幅也相對較長。理想寫法更“緊湊”，特征被放進(jìn)了句子里用名詞描述。

現(xiàn)在，大家可以嘗試把印度和中國的兩條線用理想寫法寫作。

6.答題步驟六：

Conclusion，不要忘了對于整張圖的最宏觀的整體的特征進(jìn)行總結(jié)性描述。

Overall, according to the projections, the four countries will see proportionally larger urban populations. However, the growth has been varying historically.

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